ramblin

By Kervin | February 27, 2010 | No Comments

i remember your face looking different
the angles hanging in different manners

all persuasive for a time well-spent

it is still there, but now there’s a change
something softer, this peculiar droop

i will take out my stitches now
nothing lost in the transaction of flesh

i wrote this two hours ago, and in re-reading it, i’m not too terribly proud of it. however, i tried new things with composition, so i guess it’s a successful endeavor. your feedback and criticism would be appreciated and encouraged. fire away.

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